9/25/2007

A project I'm working on, figured I'd publish it here because I'm procrastinating, and I needed comments. Hahah xD Just so you know, "I" is a fictional character.
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One.

I would like to craft a masterpiece. I've read about Hope Stars, the Mirror of Erised, the God of Small Things, Northanger Abbey. I've seen works of art I can't comprehend, silent delight spread across serious faces, brilliance shining through adversity. Piece by piece, these collections have built up and grown, forming a whole, like a broken shaft of sunlight merging to become one as the sun moves across the sky; shattering and merging, a repeated cycle.

Imagine that broken shaft of sunlight black, gothic, dark - in an alternate universe. Impenetrable, like the space in a hollowed dome without opennings, where thoughts amass. That single black ray of sunshine. Covered up by more prominent rays, stealthily, sneakily spreading through unknown pockets of the hollow dome. Silently gathering momentum. Silently, silently, silently, until a giant, golden, pristine ray of thought rises. Higher and higher it goes, curling at the edges as it hits the ceiling of the outer cylinder, finally plunging forwards with such force, the dome is flattened, surrounded by dancing golden rays.

There always is a happy ending. Remember though, the dome hasn't disappeared.

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I'm having second thoughts about that last paragraph. Incomplete, nothing special, just an attempt at something - more to come! COMMENTS PLEASE. Haha xD

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